Some highlights were the questions to ask on revising telling to be more showing.
Look for long narrative passages where you've used a lot of BE verbs. (be am was were etc.)
What emotions am I trying to convey?
What senses have I used? Where can I add sensory language?
What vivid verbs can I include to add emotion?
What details are important and add to the scene?
Is there a place for dialogue to complete the picture?