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ROAD TRIP! Movement in Writing

7/6/2012

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Currently I’m in transition. Summer means travel time for many people and us, too. We escape north to avoid the intense summer of Nevada. When I'm on a road trip these days, the destination is my main goal. 

With movement on my horizon and after talking with a couple of writers this week about necessary scenes in stories, it naturally led me to a meditation on movement in writing.

Movement propels the story forward. Anything that isn’t directly moving your story ahead may mean you are bogged down in unnecessary details. When I'm on a road trip and get side tracked due to construction or detours, it isn't moving me forward on my journey.

Many beginning writers focus on showing us every detail and making each character connect to the story. However, effective storytelling doesn’t need these details. As a reader I skip this kind of writing. As an editor, I caution writers against it. On my road trip I have a destination in mind and want to get to the next important stop.

The following fictional example of letter writing illustrates this point: I write a letter/email to a friend and say I went to dinner with John. My letter reading friend can assume I called John, decided where to meet, when to meet, who was driving, what we ordered, what the waiter said, and all these details without me spelling them out in my letter. I can then skip to the relevant information of the dinner in which John told me he planned to divorce his wife.

In the above example if I stopped and spent two pages telling how we got to dinner, something important should happen along the way to move the story forward. Perhaps I used those two pages to show John’s reluctance to talk and added tension before the big reveal. That could work. If I didn’t do that and just gave the details, the two pages can be cut.

Each scene in your story should add to either plot or characterization. Cut the chatter. You want to make your story realistic, but that does not mean real.

If you are showing character or plot elements which might not be readily apparent, but is needed background for the story’s progression down the road, keep the scene. Readers can be patient if they see little pay-offs along the way.  I am patient on my road trip if we stop for a purpose-especially if it's entertaining.

A note to pantsters: Because you didn’t plot more than a couple scenes ahead, you sometimes use filler chat as your characters tell you what happens. That is fine for your first draft, but be sure you go back and cut it in revision.

Some questions to ask: What is the objective of this scene, conversation or description? What’s the important part? Is there anything that can be cut to make it more relevant? Is this scene important to move my plot and characters forward?

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T is for Tension or What a little Subtext Offers

1/29/2012

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Do you remember the last time you felt the tension permeate a room? Did you hold your breath waiting for the bad news, the good news, the inevitable or the unexpected?

Picture the following? 
1. With two minutes left in the game, will the star player make the winning goal?
2. The big announcement: Will he get the promotion?
3. The hero leans in to the woman: Will they kiss?

The expectations set up lead the reader, making sure they turn the page to find out the answer. Without tension, the story falls flat and you risk the reader losing interest. They won't care what happens next.

Any time you can up the tension, you raise the reading pleasure for your audience. The above scenarios paint a tense picture, but by inserting a little subtext you can make the reader's heart beat a little faster.

Read the above scenarios with the following information in mind.
1. The star player suffered an injury and he didn't tell the coach.
2. The person up for promotion needs the money for a life saving operation.
3. The woman is already married. Or the hero is.

See how a little information colored your perceptions? Tension can be overt or subtle, but is necessary for a good story.

For each of your scenes, ask yourself, what information you could add to increase the tension in a scene.

Questions? Comments? I'd love to hear from you. You may comment below or email me at authorsassistant@hotmail.com

Happy Writing!
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